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its great but it needs color!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Emily (1 like)
Great character development! It’s a very deep story presented in a fun and understandable format. Great work!
Maranda
Thanks for the compliment, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-D
Varian (1 like)
I loved your story reel. It's so wholesome and adorable I loved the aspect of "don't judge a book by its cover" going both ways and giving the ghost a reason for being terrifying to the living, while the ghost themselves is actually just terrified themselves off getting their trust broken. And that both helping each other understanding comes with the reward of Chloe getting her memories back and getting peace was well build up. They grew much to me. I hope to see more from you some time! Good luck in the future! ♡
Maranda (1 like)
Thanks so much for your kind words, and I wish you luck in the future as well! :-D
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Lonely Ghosts - Finished Story Reel
One Halloween night, a lonely girl named Isabella dressed up as a ghost. While exploring an old house, she soon meets a lonely ghost named Chloe. Mistaking her for a ghost, Chloe traps Isabella inside the house so that they could be friends forever.
Thank you everyone who worked on Story Xperiental for their wisdom and for encouraging me to finally make my first storyboard.
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Maranda
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