Teagan

Like your story! Also all of your pictures.

Benedict

I love the story twist about her accepting her faith as a vampire. But I find some holes in when she decided to take on the journey, didn't anyone recognize her? I believe some considerations should be given to that thought.

Emma

The art is really nice! I liked the unique storyline and the hints at the contract earlier before it was openly stated. I’m a bit confused on what happened afterwards in the situation with media, and what was done afterwards, but it was a really nice ending to the story too and I liked your theme

Gavin

That twist at the end was great

Nikitha

This is an interesting story with a good direction of the plot, nice job. One thing that I felt could improve was that there was a lot of narration which did not feel too ideal for certain parts in this story. In addition, it was never discussed how she felt about the media until the very end, which felt too suddenly introduced.

Chloe

Interesting twists towards the end! the story also has a fascinating premise. I think what would solidify Aria's decision to remain as a vampire, even more, will be to include how she felt when she was free of the media while she's hiding in her room, or even include some quirks/power she gained from being a vampire. That can make her desire to remain as a vampire even stronger.