Troy

THANKS everyone for all the positive comments!

Rushmi

I really like the concept of the haunted pac-man game!

Greer

I like your concept, and I think your protagonist has a strong personality! I wish that your audio was at a more even volume, sometimes it's very loud and sometimes it's barely audible. Great job with your story!

Kevin

I like the general concept but I am a little confused about the story

Emma

I like how there’s well expressed emotion through the narration, it really makes it more interesting to listen to. The sound effects add a nice detail as well, it’s a really good story! Though I’m a bit confused on what the theme was, and it said he had no friends but at the end says he gets back with them. Does that mean he made new friends or got in touch with old ones? That is a bit confusing. Good job!

Anna

I really liked the script! The narrator was emotive an compelling. I also liked the art - it was simple, but very descriptive of the main character's perception of himself and the world. The footsteps and other audio effects were really ingenious as well. However, I was confused about the general storyline. Did the man try to electrocute himself because he saw that he had a tattoo of three hearts? And if he had three lives, did electrocution not kill him once (he didn't lose a heart)? The part about him not having friends also confused me - I don't see how that's related to him having three lives. The moral in general was unclear to me. The last 45 seconds of pictures were also sideways.

Natalie

I love the background music in the beginning. However, I feel like if the Pacman machine is so powerful it should be harder to get to. Did the car crash take away two lives at once? How? Very good prompt though.

Malia

Haha! This is funny. I watched one of your guys first ever videos so it is cool to see how it had improved! The level of the sound it perfect at the beginning, gets really quiet and then really loud again. Nice pictures, and I like how there is some color in the drawings. Good job overall, but maybe try to improve the sound and even it out.

Ricardo

The story is a little sloppy, try to edit it a bit!

Story

Very good! I thought you did great with the music and sound effects. I love how you used your character to narrate, I thought it was brilliant.

Haley

The voice could be better. Confused On the story. Its everywhere I feel like.