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Theresa
This was a cute story with a clear spine. The drawings were rough and we think these artists could have spent more directed time drawing and coloring their images. Lots of potential!!
Malia
Good details. I like how in the first picture you have the outline of the state of Montana! Something that could improve a little bit is the voice and volume, they are all at different levels and hard to understand. I do really like the thought that has gone into the story, but I am a bit unclear with what the moral and theme of the story is.
Alejandro
should be showed not told
Elina
I like the idea but I wished that some things were shown to the audience instead of just directly told.
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Trail to Montana
Trail to Montana
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Team:
Caden Tye Jacinta Lane
Caden, Jacinta, Lane, Tye
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