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Jackson
It looks amazing
Megan
It looks really good
Bella
I really like the dialogue; the story telling is super good!
Quang Khai
it is really good
Teagan
I love all of this! I just have one question: Is one of them a girl or are both of them boys? I honestly don't care, just confused. Also, the music was sorta loud in the heart-felt moment.
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The Story of Chick 'n Alfred - O' how saucy it is!
Two rivals are at gustatory war when one realizes the other is too hot to resist. They find out that they are better together than apart.
We would like to thank Ms. Amy, who this project would not be possible without; Patrick, who didn't actually really do anything for us but deserves to be on this list; Nate and Thomas, whose antics inspired our characters; and finally the rest of our AP English class, who dealt with our terrible name puns.
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Ben, Eli, Mattie, Olivia
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