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Andrea
Hey! I like the premise of the story! For the way it ended, I can imagine this was only act 1. Considering that this was a project made by a team, I imagine some people had a little trouble downloading the pictures as some of them seem to be blurry. I also liked the music that you chose, as it gives the fantasy vibe since the beginning. Hope you get to develop your story further!
Andres
I like concept. the draws could be a little better for next time. But its great. I dont have any suggestions.
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