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Mokihana
I loved how the character was super developed and clear. The idea of wave surfing was exciting and I liked seeing it drawn out.
Megan
It looks great. The drawings are so good
Story
I loved it! Your art was marvelous and your narration was super clear. I actually felt like your film would've made perfect sense if you replaced the narration with music and sound effects like most professional short films do. Just a suggestion, I think it's good either way. Great job!
Mónica
Great job with your story, i really like your artwork :)
Jose
great story
Johnathan
i like the art the story has potenial
Angel
i like the art
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