Levi

Great job on your drawings. I really like the plot and the story itself, but maybe have the character talk more so it’s not just narration.

Ana

I love the worldbuilding here. Especially Gorro's hideout! The story's dark nature definitely took me by surprise, as you'd usually expect a story that started out this way to end up positively. I actually really liked the plot, and it definitely kept my attention. Good job :-)

Mattie

I really like the story and how the death of the Fauna transformed Flora. Great work and story!

Alan

I like the story and the video.

David

Good job! Nice art

Marco

I like the drawings

Angel

I like the art

Manea-Joy

I love ur main character and the cat!!

Keya

omg ur drawings are so pretty and amazing, and deliver a fantasy/mythical mood which is so cool! nice story as well :))

Solomon

I like how magical the world is, with fantasy elements that make the whole experience feel magical. I feel like you could’ve added a bit more color to the drawings, but I like the story and the message the story is going for.

Makena

This story was full of surprises and I absolutely loved it! You have done such a great job at creating a interesting and also very clear story. Well done my friend 😊

Braden

It is a great story, if a depressing one. I also wish you had included a few sound effects, especially for the action scenes? Otherwise, great job.

Brendan

I love this idea

Gabriella (1 like)

the story is cool i am a little confused on what this is written on is it a white board

Claire

it's dotted journaling paper! :)