Max

Intriguing story with good artwork to support. If I understand you moral correctly I would recommend supporting it a little more like explaining why its ok to "move on". otherwise love the characters and the world. great work!

Anna

This story is really interesting! It was compelling to me as the audience, but it seemed like a fairly generic plotline. The visuals were really useful and helped with the storytelling, and I would have loved it if they could have more color. The character development was great and very relatable to an audience. I also really liked how the dialogue was emotive and compelling. However, a few details and the moral were a bit confusing for me - there seemed to be a lot of quick transitions without too much context or reasoning. The transition to a giant factory seemed unnecessary, and it felt like you jumped the gun some. I suggest keeping it simple and fleshing out the basics.

Jacinta

I liked the drawings. Why you chose this story.

Sam

It was a amazing story it would be nice if there was some color I was confused on the moral

Bryce

Character building and story were clear. I was unclear of what the moral was though. Overall solid work.