Jackie

Wow, that was really a great story! I was drawn in by the title & cute character design. Even though I'm a Mom, who has long since graduated from College, I remember those days very well, especially in the pressure of choosing the best major, so that I could become my best self. I can tell you first hand, that the experience of life, does indeed mold us, and we are able to experience many positions, which lead to growth in so many unexpected ways. I still want to become my best, which is why I wanted to participate in this Xperiential program. No matter how old we are, we will always have goals & dreams which may seem unattainable. But as long as we stay true to who we really are, and make sure we make time for those we love, then we will all continue to grow in such beautiful ways. Thank you for sharing such a heartwarming story with an important message of hope & direction. If you refine your video in the future, please do let me know, as I'd love to see it. Kind regards & blessings from the Isles of the Sea, jAckie =)

Andrea (1 like)

This was such a good story! I think that we’ve all been Pip, wether that was choosing a major, a masters, a job or a hobby. I really like how you didn’t indicate which major he ended up choosing, as it gives a sense that you don’t have to choose just one version of yourself. The only thing I would adjust would be the music used in the act 2, as it gave away a feeling of terror, Maybe a song a little upbeat would have worked? A song that represents anguish but it’s not too sad. I would love to see this story as an actual short film!! I think it would be of great impact for kids who are going through the same thing.