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Adair
The illustrations are amazing! I love the use of light and dark colors / accessories / imagery to further emphasize the themes in the story.
David
This was fantastic! I LOVE the character driven story
Tatyana
Incredible :)
Arabu (1 like)
Really loved it
Samuel (1 like)
I like how the frames did a good job of showing the emotion even more. The story is interesting and I felt it was clear. Good job!
Francisco (1 like)
Hey, Richard! Really nice done — The theme about life, death and supreme beings is really well developed. My favorite moment still is when she recalls her dad — it makes me wonder so many situations and images about what could have happened. Well done!
Kristin (1 like)
I loved the emotions presented in this! Very strong use of storytelling!
Carol
This is so great. I felt all the emotions. Great job! All about this works, voice over, illustrations. Congratulations!
Tyler (1 like)
You have a great storytelling voice and the squares really made me feel immersed into the story.
Belen (1 like)
Great story!! I love the dialogues and the intensity, the characters are deep, great work!!
Javier (2 likes)
I’m glad I found you again after the whole process. It is a very powerful story and interesting. Very well done. Things are clear and the characters are amazing
Richard (1 like)
Thank you! I really appreciate you saying that. I've enjoyed this process, but I'm happy to see this across the line, finally. No more 1am work nights for me. :)
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