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Ava (1 like)
I love the drawings and the storyline! I really like the space drawing at the beginning too. The color highlighting important elements made them really pop out as well! Good job!
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Mias story!
This was rewritten so many times and I'm still not so sure about it and I know there were two weeks to do this but I had some family issues to deal with and I could only do so much. I did my best and that's what really mattered. I really enjoyed this class Thank you story xperiential and Pixar for this opportunity! I've learned so much about storytelling and I can't wait to use these new skills in the future!
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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