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Jackson
Story and drawings are good
Teagan
Like the story and drawings.
Carrie
Great story line.
Sophia
It's interesting Antonio fights against the evil "Ant" Syndicate. Very good potential for world building, especially why there is a need for heroes and villains!
Elina
I like the concept but I wished some things were expanded on like why he lost and why he is so strong. Some plot points were a little unclear and not really explained.
Bryce
I love the moral and story progression. It was little hard to follow but overall it was good
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Tales From the Amazon - the saga
In a Far away and majestic land, there live amazing heroes that fight to protect all from evil. One such hero, Antonio learns the value of teamwork through his encounter with the evil Ant Syndicate
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Koromogawa
Palikūokane
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