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Mr. Charcoal in Recovery-Land
Mr. Charcoal learns to take care of itself in Recovery-Land
Moral:
In order to really take care, oneself must accept its current skills and limitations!
The storyline:
The frog, Mr. Charcoal, creates a tornado because of his bad decisions of not taking care of himself leading him to a burnout, represented by the tornado and by turning himself red instead of green
The tornado eventually sends him far away and also destroys the City
He recovers at the farm with the horses but starts to get injured and doesn't take care of himself again so he collapses one more time
But the difference this time is that after collapsing he takes care of himself and balances its health better, achieving better life conditions.
Special thank you to everyone who gave us feedback. It really made the difference from StoryXperiential teams and outside friends.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Raining Frogs
Diego, Diego, Maria Teresa
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