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Cheyenne (1 like)
You did a great job editing your video together! The addition of fx is really great. Good job!
Frank (1 like)
Great job with the pacing of the story and the shot selection really helped present the story clearly. Nice job!
Álvaro (1 like)
Really Good work Tomas!! I loved the drawings honestly. And family is always the best theme, isn't it? kudos!!
Varian (2 likes)
Wow! Incroyable! I was rooting for Leo until the end.
I wouldn't have anything to add but praise.
Great shots, beautiful voice acting and scenery.
Thank you so much for taking us along on this adventure Team Madrigals!
I hope to see more from you in the future!
William (3 likes)
Amazing story! The sound and the world building really makes your storyboard come to life.
Samuel (3 likes)
That’s a creative story. It’s really cool and it’s straight forward
Emma (3 likes)
I think you’ve created a wonderful story that is just as adventurous as the main character. Your choice in audio, music, and fx is great and you have very good editing skills. I think the theme you chose is a good teaching lesson. Overall a very good story. Congratulations!
Kennedi (2 likes)
The dialog was great and I love the moral of the story.
Victor (2 likes)
This is so cool, especially the sound sych, nice adventure story
Kayla (2 likes)
I loved this! Your use of sfx and music really worked with each scene. The storyboarding was great as well and the story itself only got more and more interesting as it went on. Awesome work!
Jasmine (2 likes)
I've been following your story for a while and I LOVE your final cut! Your draftsmanship, the music, the pacing, the SFX. Seeing how far its come and how it all comes together is such a treat, I hope your entire team is proud!
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