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Grace (1 like)
Great drawings and ideas! I love the character development; the main character is relatable!
Rushmi (1 like)
Although a bit confusing in the beginning and in the scene in which his shadow criticizes him, the story had a really nice message! The music really helped build the mood, too :)
Theresa (2 likes)
Loved the heart beat!. Great animations. Interesting plot. Like the idea of better friends and allusion to racism. Nice
Adinnah (2 likes)
I like your story and drawings, although I got a little lost what was happening with the friends. Overall great job!
Finn (2 likes)
I like this concept of the shadows, I like how at the end he has to accept his shadows and overcome his fears.
Dylan (2 likes)
love it because it should how to face your fears and insecurities, and not everyone will judge you for your passion
nothing was confusing.
maybe you can have Finley meet another kid who is getting bullied, and have him stand up for him.
Keya (2 likes)
i love the concept of this story! it's really cool how Finely realizes his true self and learns to accept his shadow and not let others' criticism affect him so much. the music and sound effects (ex. heartbeat) add a lot to this storyreel as well! nice job
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A World Without Shadows Storyboard
This is the story of a person named Finley Aspen who was aspiring to live a normal life in his non-shadowed world.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Team:
C.O.Q. And A Juicebox
Ethan, Jessica, Sage, Sawyer
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