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Sandhya
i love this!
Jessica
I liked the story and narration but the audio can maybe be turned up just a bit! Other than that good job!
Ricardo
I really like the narration, ,maybe turn up the audio a bit
Blanki
the concept of your story is good but I think you should improve the audio.
Jose
Great story.
Cooper
I like the storytelling, but there are some things that dont make sense, like how they killed a buffalo for food, but went looking for food the next day even though they killed a buffalo.
Jacqueline
The use of music was very well done, and the narrator was very animated!
Brendan
The storytelling in this is pretty great!
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Ahmik
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Levi, Mya, Averie, Rosa
Averie, Levi, Mya, Rosalynn
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