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Isabella

I love this story!!! I love how they sound like Animal Crossing characters! Great job!!!

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Krista

It's so great to finally see the whole story in action! The way you made them speak sounded really cute, and you even made each bug have a unique different voice! Well done!

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Rushmi

That was such a cool story! It was overall very serene, and I like the art for it :) The way the fireflies speak to each other is really nice too!

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Jessica

I love the animation and style! I also love all the music and different voices each character has it can really help the people watching understand a bit more! Voices were a bit loud but I didn't mind! Amazing Job!

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Mónica

I love everything about your story, the colors and the artwork were so good, great job :)

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Max

First off, your drawing and animation is flawless. I love the style of it and how it contributes to the story. While I did like the exclusive use of subtitles for dialogue, the sound used when they where talking was for me a little "sharp" and made reading what was said a little tricky. The story was rather unique and engaging. Amazing work!!!!!

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Hanna

I loved the drawings of the characters, especially how you used the color yellow throughout the story. I would like to see the dialogue in Fynn and Ryder's conversation near the end of the story. I suggest muffling the voices of the characters, so their language doesn't distract from other parts of the story.

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Nightlight

Woo it’s finished :D

Literally thank you to anyone who gave me feedback! Your comments really helped to shape the story and helped me come up with ideas, so thank you once again! I had a great time doing this program and learned new techniques I’ll use in my actual classes so thank you to the Pixar crew as well :D

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