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An (1 like)
Interesting sketches, the ending was not something I was expecting, I was expecting the robot and fisherman would live happily ever after, it was great. Great moral too.
Pedro
this look scary put this in halloween for michael myers new mask
Israel
Menacing and interesting sketches.
Samantha
I love the story! Everything was really clear :)
Nalani (1 like)
Love how the story ends. What a happy ending. Good story and very clear. I dont have any questions at this time, but it really made me "FEEL" emotions. I felt sad for the robot , then I felt happy when he was found. And then when the robot was at the cliff deciding to push the owner off the cliff. I also felt mad about the robot being treated that way but was hoping he wasn't going to push the owner off because thats sad ending. But love your message! GOOD JOB!
Nalani
sorry what I meant is- I love the moral of the story and even if it wasn't a happy ending- it is a good message and causes us viewers to want to take action. sorry it wasn't a happy ending lol but it was a good ending because of a good message. - correcting my typo at the beginning of this comment
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The Robot That Wanders
The final of our short.
I would like to thank my teammates for coming up with this story. Both of you are really creative and this was a really cool story! Thank you Julian for helping with the audio and helping remind me to turn in projects, and for being understanding when I had technical issues. Thank you Jak for the art that you did and for turning stuff in when I couldn't. You're both great teammates. Lastly, thank you to my teacher Ms. Amy for encouraging us to do this!
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Caitlin, Jak, Julian
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