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Tea (1 like)
I really enjoyed the sketches, sound effects and music
The story had a lot of emotion
I appreciate the abandoned dog getting a home in the end.
Álvaro (2 likes)
Aww!! it's Amazing, I love Dogs so this short film really moved me ;) Simple yet portraying such cotidian situation with a very clear message "We all deserve happiness and to be loved". Really good storyboarding and The dog design is fantastic, Kudos!! But I wish I had had more entries of your work. I'd have loved to see the process all along! Anyway Good work!! Greetings!!
Andrea (2 likes)
I Loved the story and the sound! great job! Maybe it would be nice to see the woman a bit earlier being alone and in need of company.
Jiwoo (2 likes)
Wow wow wow!
I loved your use of sound, its quality was on another level! Also, your storyboarding was visually pleasing and highly conveying. At first, I got a little confused by the boy suddenly appearing, but I could understand on my second view. What I think you can do the strengthen that scene is to have a little buildup - maybe you can show the boy's feet approaching the dog, or you can also present the boy right after a taxi crosses right in front of the dog. I totally loved your dialogue, which succinctly yet surely provided an emotional hook to engage with a new character. Great work!
William
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FOUND
“Found” is a story that takes place in Hong Kong, about a dog who wants to find a home, but through its struggles being abandoned and losing hope, the dog un-expectantly finds someone that feels like home.
STORY XPERIENTIAL, PIXAR ANIMATION STUDIOS, and my family.
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