Ani (1 like)

I love the evolution if this story. I think that is time to go to the next step: finishing the entire with colors and everything

Sara (1 like)

I remember this story really won my heart. There were so many details that reminded me of things I love and I have to say it turned out just as good as it started. I love the fact that we are following the story through the protagonist's point of view, it makes everything more engaging and helps viewers really get into Bean's world. I think the drawings are great! Wonderful job!!

Adair (1 like)

I love the main character and her story! So sweet. Well done already moving into dialogue.

Tomas (1 like)

Hi, I think you did a very good job in character development, it feels like someone existing in his world and who has external and internal conflicts to solve.
I feel that there are moments that can be greatly enhanced with the use of music that exalts the emotions of the character or the conflict of the story.
Thank you very much for your work, congratulations, it is one of my favorites.

Jackie (1 like)

Bravo Ally, that was such a delightful story. Yours is the first one that actually broke free from reading the story spine, and to give us real dialogue. I loved the music motif, and the sound of the cabinet, rain & car door. I loved the pacing of the story, and how you were not afraid to have quiet reflection. I loved how Bean looked like her grandma. And I loved the reading of the letters, and how they both said they hadn't stopped loving each other. Thank you for sharing something so precious, in a wonderful presentation. And congratulations on not only finishing, but really shining with originality & charm. May you be blessed, not only in being able to pursue your dreams, but in having a loving Happy family. Kind regards from the Isles of the Sea, jAckie

Megan (1 like)

Having seen a version of this earlier in the program, I have to say off the bat, I love the enhancements you made to the visual of Bean. I like the illustrations! I also really like the message/sentiment that your story achieves through the dialogue between Grandma and Bean. Additionally, I liked how you were able to tie up the loose ends at the end of the story while showing real growth and development for Bean. Terrific job!

Kennedi (1 like)

Awh. Ally that was great. The voices and dialog really helped the story. Made me a little emotional because it's mother's day. Thank you.

Álvaro (1 like)

Hello! your story is really nice too! I'm amazed you get to do almost 14 minutes!! It felt like watching a current episode! Good work!

Richard (1 like)

What a wonderful story. Very sweet and charming. I like how you unfolded the backstory and how you integrated the cat. Very nicely done! Congratulations!

Samantha (1 like)

I love your art style and I can see that you've really thought about the details that go into each shot and even the dialogue (like at the beginning when Bean's mother and grandmother say something that she shouldn't do and she responds with what we're all used to saying "I will!"). I really appreciate the thought and detail you've put into every aspect of your storyreel. I really enjoyed watching this - awesome work!

Francisco (1 like)

Lovely story. All the scenes flow really well. Acting is really emotional and filled with life. Nice job! :)

Jacquelin (1 like)

I enjoyed this been watching it from the beginning as well. Great job!

Bethany (1 like)

I have followed this story since the start and I have to say that I love it! It is so sweet! It seems to keep me on my toes and is very unpredictable and I love that in a story. Everything was clear to me and I can't think of anything to make it stronger, because it was great just the way it was!

Shayleen (2 likes)

Oh man! This is such a sweet story! I love the twist at the end - I wasn’t expecting it at all! You did an amazing job of visual storytelling and your voice acting was so good. :) There wasn’t anything I was confused by - it was a great story and the boards were clear!

Ahmira (1 like)

love the art and the storyline.i was watching with popcorn so good !

Christopher (1 like)

Loved the sound work and art.
It was a little long and I had a hard time following along. But other than that, excellent work! Loved it!