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Steven
Really like how the story is being told and the way there is a hidden message in here as well, one that children can grow up with learning.
Amy
I like the facial expressions and I like the flower on top of the monster. This also has a good message, although the changes in Frank could be made more clear and could draw on more emotions. For example, I would love to witness how the stress and loss of the mother gradually caused him to have such anger.
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Georges story
George find friendship
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Lucca
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