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Marc
the text at the bottom was a nice way to help understand what was going on
Ricardo
I really love the animation!
Julian
I liked the art direction. The story felt sort of lost so i would reccomend streamlining it and adding more narration and dialogue.
Andres
i like the art
Kaden
I think the drawings are good but there is definitely a lot more that needs to be done. Some things need to be made clearer and I think it would benefit from telling us more about the background or the story. Otherwise I think there is a lot of potential and you should keep up the good work.
Elina
I really like the story and the art but some transitions or cuts between the panels were a little sharp and disorientating.
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More than Survival (wip 2/3)
Sorry for any missing dialogue or like the switching between subs and voice, I reviewed the audio I recorded and though “there’s no way I’m putting this on the web” but I couldn’t record new lines so that’s,, my solution.
This is only the first and second act but I’m fairly happy with it now, I just wanna work on it more over the summer.
Special thanks to my man Ethan who went over it with me for critiques that didn’t end up getting implemented yet, and Mrs. M for finding and signing me up for this program.
Special Thanks:
Team:
The caterpillars
Blessing, Cori, Jayda, Marlene
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