Averie

Good pictures. Do more talking.

Bella

LOVE the visuals! I think there could be more character development or interactions between them to really build up the story :)

Patrick

I loved how you personified a spider; these revolutionary strides forward in the storyboarding community make this animation stand out. I see that my peers have already begun to address several issues. If you'll indulge me, I'd like to direct your attention to a lack of character development. I want to make it clear, the primary reason that these vanilla characters pain me is not because of the glaring holes in the story. My issue lies with the fact that Sammy and Jaden have so much unexplored potential. These characters are never given their chance to shine.

Thomas

The visuals are really cool, but I'm very confused. I can't really tell what the story is, so clarifying that would improve the video significantly.

Johnathan

animations were good story was a bit unclear

Israel

The whole video was unclear but animations are entertaining.

Cooper

I think this could use more of a story

Tyler

As others have said, the whole story is too short. No idea of whatever the plot may be, and overall hard to make out what’s going on.

Nikitha

The story definitely has potential, the spider seems like it could develop into an interesting character. But, like another commentator said, the plot is too short and confusing.

Braden

I like what the story has the potential to be, but it seems very short and confusing where the plot goes. Also, does Animaker really count as animation? Otherwise, I think this could develop into a good funny story.

Kylie

I really like your story line, but ait is too short, and what happens to the spider later? Does the woman find her? You need some more detail. I also like your animation?