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Samuel
I like the creativity and I think it was clear. Well done!
Shomari
This story has so many possibilities for expansion. The introduction makes me want to engage and prepare for the journey ahead. I would really like to know more details around how the test arrives so quickly? Why was the main character chosen to go on this adventure? Is this experience unique to this character only? Love the potential. Great work!
Ahmira
i love the flow from the hook to the climax great story !
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Eritrea Calling
