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Thomas
The images were really neat -- among the best I've seen. My one suggestion would be to lower the music volume so that the narration is more audible. Great job!
Amy
I love the music and the message. Some parts were confusing because I could not quote understand the narration. I suggest making it a little shorter, especially the end - you don't need quite as much explanation of the moral.
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"Eclipse"
In the story "Eclipse", which takes place on Earth far in the future, Apollo from the Sun Kingdom and Luna from the Moon Kingdom are in troubled waters... and a storm is brewing. If they don't settle the rising tension between them, conflict will break out between the two kingdoms.
I am very grateful for my team members for helping out so much, and also my parents and grandma for encouraging me along the way as my team and I completed our story reel journey. Our final product wouldn't be the same without our comments, as well, so thank you so much to the people who gave great feedback to our past videos.
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Braden, Eamon, Seneca
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