Erika (1 like)

Great art! And a very fun idea that he switches bodies and learns to appreciate cats because of it. I love cats and I think you show them very well in this story.
I do think you could trim down some unnecessary details from the story without losing the heart. The part about the robot confused me and didn’t feel like it was relevant to the rest of the story. I think it would be enough to say he only had friends online. Also being bullied is terrible but I don’t see how losing his allergies would make him be bullied any less. If you want to go in that direction, I think it would help to show how his personality and personal confidence have grown because of the experience.
On the other hand you briefly show a network of intelligent spy cats that is really cool and also very confusing. I would recommend either making that a bigger, more important part of the story or removing that detail entirely since the rest of the story can happen exactly the same without it.
Good job! I hope you keep it up!

Nazish

I like the idea of a boy with cat allergies being put into the body of a cat - Nice idea! I also like how their personalities were so opposite, that gives it a really nice contrast. Personally I think it may have been better to have a person narrate it, so it can have more energy and flow in the sound. I just wasn't too sure how the bullying played a factor in the story as a whole, I would take a look and see if that's really necessary to be there. It was a fun idea for a character's dilemma!

Eric

Expert, EXPERT visuals! Masterful artwork that was engaging and flowed nicely. I feel like I could have turned the sound completely off and understood the story. I could also connect with the main character because I too suffer from most things (cats included) and it can really be a struggle! I think you fleshed out Daniel in particular, really well.

Francisco

The story is very clear, the beats are quite understandable and the story about changing bodies is really fun. Great job! Btw, the drawings are just great!

Maria Teresa

The story is well understood, the drawings are pretty, I like them, the kittens look very cute, what I think is that the narration coud be a little better.

Álvaro (1 like)

Hello Ani! I really liked your way of drawing, and the plot is cute too. Also you added so many details into the plot, that's really great!

Jenny

I like so many of these drawings but especially love the image of when Daniel as the cat is disgusted by the tuna! I kept going back and forth if I like the way the text shows up and is announced because it gives a cool vibe but also was a bit awkward when it took too long of pauses in wrong places. Fascinating story reel, very well done!

Aranza (1 like)

I like that your story is about cats and the character design is very cute!
I think it was way too easy how they find out she talked with animals.
I would make it a little "harder" how they find out that they changed souls.

Javier

I found very interesting that freaky Friday aspect of the characters.

Eric

I really like the characters, they seem so well fleshed out for such early stages. I also like how the lead suffers from allergies, I can definitely relate and it sure is a big challenge to overcome on its own, cant wait to see how he pulls it off.

Anna

I didn't understand why at the end Daniel doesn't have allergies any more. I would suggest to cut some details about the allergies and the bullying at the beginning (that were a little redundant) to have more time to explain better the ending. I really liked the message of the story though.