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Ana
I'm Brazilian and I loved it
Edith (1 like)
BEST. STORY. EVER. This just goes to show that a film/short story/animation doesn't need words to have a good story, besides, I always liked silent films ever since I was a kid and I still like them now! Great job!
Vale (1 like)
This is incredible! At times it felt to me like the pace was a little fast, but overall I love it!
Andres (1 like)
Grate tale and grate art
Andres (1 like)
I love the caracthers, great draws
Antonio (2 likes)
I love your reel! It is compelling, clear and with a lot of emotion. Congratulations!
AJ (4 likes)
You have such an amazing story and the drawings have so much emotions and thought to them. Love it!
Nicolás (1 like)
Beautiful story, i loved your drawings. Great great job.
Hally Bellah-Guther (3 likes)
I WAS CRYING! That is the ultimate right? There were a couple of moments when I was slightly confused but overall this was simply incredibly awesome! Thanks for your effort, talent and a beautifully executed story!
Joshua (1 like)
Beautiful Story. Great drawings and very exciting to watch.
Shayleen (2 likes)
You got some tears outta me. :,) This story is told so well - your boards are clear and communicate everything really beautifully.
Honestly, there isn’t anything confusing to me. I loved it and have enjoyed seeing this story progress from the beginning of this course. Congrats on a job well done!
Chad (1 like)
WOW!!! The sound effect for this reel are amazing. Great Job. I remember the narrations from the past and good follow along well. The background music is just enough. Awesome Job.
Megan (1 like)
The final illustrations are great! I like the use of the music to tell your story - it really brings it to life and help convey what you are trying to say. I missed some of the dialogue from the earlier versions but feel like the story was well developed even without it. I do think if the drawings had a little color, it would be an even stronger story just given some of the tropical forest setting. Overall, it is a really sweet story and I really enjoyed getting to see the final product! :)
Francisco (1 like)
Such a beautiful story. Very well done. The first sequence is just awesome, actually every scene. The art is great, the characters are so appealing and adorable. Everything is so clear and filled with emotion. The family theme is really really moving. Congrats! :)
Kennedi (1 like)
I cried. How sweet.
Kennedi (2 likes)
Now that I've had time to process your story. I cried because I plan on adopting kids one day and this is the type of story I want to tell them. That even though I am a wolf and they are a dragon... we may look different and come from different backgrounds but that doesn't change the fact that we are family. Thank you for your story.
Matthew (1 like)
The artwork on this is outstanding, super clean, strong posing, excellent expressions. The story is also excellent, the only suggestion I would offer is that it seems a bit long to me, so perhaps tightening it up a bit more. But other than that this is easily one of the best submissions, excellent work!
Maria Teresa (1 like)
Verry good job ¡¡¡¡
Evry thing is well done,drawings, timeing, sound, beautiful story.....
Shomari (1 like)
The music and sound effects are a great addition to the story. The art is very well done and captures the charters moods and expressions very well. The story really moves forward through the large amount of illustrations contributed to the story reel. Well done!
Samantha (1 like)
Everything about this is perfect, I absolutely LOVE it! It was heartfelt and I really love your art style! The shot compositions and flow of the story couldn't have been better - absolutely outstanding work! I wouldn't be surprised if your storyreel is voted as the top favourite! (I've started following you too because if you develop this further then I would be so keen to see it!)
Taylor (1 like)
Right off the bat, I loved it. Your illustrations are beautiful! You draw expressions very well. The music choices captured the moments, emotions, and characters. This story is so beautifully written and told - it made me cry happy tears!!! I can't wait to see more of your work!!!!
Alia (1 like)
Came to your to simply say: I love it. Incredible.
Behnaz (1 like)
I loved your drawing and your story is so sweet! I enjoyed watching your story! Good Job!
Sanchez (1 like)
I've loved watching this story develop over the weeks, and heartfelt the final reel ended up being. A unique spin on a fish-out-of-water/orphan story!
Melissa (1 like)
I think this story has a lot of potential. The animatics are great, and this reminds me of many orphan stories -- but this is pretty unique. I've never heard of a wolf and a dragon together.
Ahmira (1 like)
i felt so connected and loved the story from beginning to end
James (1 like)
I love it. I felt very connected to the characters. The story was complete but could have been cut in some areas.
Lee (1 like)
Illustrations and storytelling are very strong
Constanza (1 like)
Kayla.... I am speachless!
Well i've been recovering for this so now i have my words back!
Your artwork is stunning!!!
Since the first moment and scene I was immersive on your story! You have done such an amazing work!
The visual language story of yours is so wonderful! It is easy to understand! The character expressions are just magnificent! The poses, the lineart, the shadowing, the background, the character movement through your drawings, makes me feel inside this story. Wanting always to know more.
My congratulations and recognition for your work, hard and lovely work 💕
This story and characters are so compelling, they are readable and interesting.
You have done also an amazing job with the sound and music effect. It is ossom how you brought me from earth to sky through your characters nature. Flying, runing, even with fire!
For real my dear, I'm still amazed by such skillfull presentation and honestly I'm very glad I got to see your story💕💓 please keep in this path and giving us such wonderful moments with your art ❤️🤯✨🙆🏽♀️
Fiona (1 like)
Beautiful. The way the music matches the action is very well done. And the drawings are lovely. Haha you should be very happy!
Richard (1 like)
Gorgeous, front to back! Congratulations on a phenomenal story reel and kudos for telling it without VO. It works really well!
Klaas (1 like)
Very cool!
Love it. The story progress and the Storyboard itself is great. Love it.
Javier (1 like)
It was super cool watching the whole process. And the drawings are incredible. Everything is clear!! Congrats!
Enkhee (1 like)
Oh, come on! 😋 It's too cool! 😍🤩🤤
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Wolf and Dragon
This is the story of a baby dragon that's raised by a lone wolf. Together they'll understand the importance of family as their livelihood is threatened.
Just wanted to thank my family. Especially to my mother, for always being supportive and for believing in me.
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